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Zealously Together #2
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Dyn could feel his heart beat hard and fast. His Breath was heavy, as he tried to figure whether to try and fight the Zealot, or Run like hell to Shelter. The ONI building, though damaged, was still close by.
However being caught up in his decision making found he had taken too long, as the Zealot clumsly slashed at him.
Dyn dodged the blade and fell hard on the floor. Quickly he turned to face the Zealot, when it jumped into the trench, landing its full wait onto his leg, causing him to shout in pain.
Dyn aimed his rifle at the centre of the Elites chest, and shouted "Take this you son of a bitch!" But his heart sunk when nothing but clicks sounded. He starred horror at the ammo counter. 00. His Rifle was empty. His stare then raised to the Zealot who weakly lifted his sword towards the Deer.
As stared at his foe, he could see the exhaustion in the creatures eyes. Thick purple Blood oozed from his wounds. The creature, though stood tall and powerfully over the Marine, was only barely capable of doing so.
As Dyn, finally accepted his fate, he felt the world shake, viciously. His ears were deafened by the enormous explosion that had erupted.
The Shiva Nukes had impacted the Covenant Corvettes, causing them to erupt in Purple and Blue flames. Covenant Banshees and Spirit aircraft began falling from the skies as their power was dissipated by the electric shockwave from the explosion.
The Zealot, suddenly collapsed on top of Dyn. Having been brought to his physical limit.
Dyn now trapped beneath the weight of this monster began crawling. But quickly noticed, that there had been a secret shaft in the trench (which used to be a house).
Dyn still trapped, quickly pulled open the hatch, and dragged himself and the Zealot into the depths below, just as the deadly flames of Nuclear fire swept over the landscape.
Dyn had survived the battle, but would he be able to survive the Fallout.
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YAY! I pushed through and did a second image. I was struggling with this one somewhat, as a comic form would be able to convey everything, but all this would encompass about 5 pages (as I am still struggling with the Whore of Ba'Na Mortaria #10 (which I am still working on)).
But I managed to persevere and get this done. I edited a bit of the original posts story, and may continue to do so, to make this all co-horrent.
All in all, not bad me, I like where this series is heading, as I am in a better postion to present my vision than I was at the Start of my artistic progression. HUZZAH!
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Original Submission on FA:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/34604189/
However being caught up in his decision making found he had taken too long, as the Zealot clumsly slashed at him.
Dyn dodged the blade and fell hard on the floor. Quickly he turned to face the Zealot, when it jumped into the trench, landing its full wait onto his leg, causing him to shout in pain.
Dyn aimed his rifle at the centre of the Elites chest, and shouted "Take this you son of a bitch!" But his heart sunk when nothing but clicks sounded. He starred horror at the ammo counter. 00. His Rifle was empty. His stare then raised to the Zealot who weakly lifted his sword towards the Deer.
As stared at his foe, he could see the exhaustion in the creatures eyes. Thick purple Blood oozed from his wounds. The creature, though stood tall and powerfully over the Marine, was only barely capable of doing so.
As Dyn, finally accepted his fate, he felt the world shake, viciously. His ears were deafened by the enormous explosion that had erupted.
The Shiva Nukes had impacted the Covenant Corvettes, causing them to erupt in Purple and Blue flames. Covenant Banshees and Spirit aircraft began falling from the skies as their power was dissipated by the electric shockwave from the explosion.
The Zealot, suddenly collapsed on top of Dyn. Having been brought to his physical limit.
Dyn now trapped beneath the weight of this monster began crawling. But quickly noticed, that there had been a secret shaft in the trench (which used to be a house).
Dyn still trapped, quickly pulled open the hatch, and dragged himself and the Zealot into the depths below, just as the deadly flames of Nuclear fire swept over the landscape.
Dyn had survived the battle, but would he be able to survive the Fallout.
-
YAY! I pushed through and did a second image. I was struggling with this one somewhat, as a comic form would be able to convey everything, but all this would encompass about 5 pages (as I am still struggling with the Whore of Ba'Na Mortaria #10 (which I am still working on)).
But I managed to persevere and get this done. I edited a bit of the original posts story, and may continue to do so, to make this all co-horrent.
All in all, not bad me, I like where this series is heading, as I am in a better postion to present my vision than I was at the Start of my artistic progression. HUZZAH!
-
Original Submission on FA:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/34604189/
5 years ago
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