deviantART Desc: A redo of this: http://darkoverord.deviantart.com/art/DO-CAN-BE-HAPPY-156293988 (SF Note, is there a way of making this less ugly and using some form of HTML or BBS code?)

There's plenty of errors in this, and I wasn't gonna finish it, but Crim said I should and the fact I can spot this is a good thing.